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Topic: Jane Austen’s Characters Look for Work - Use your imagination to help one of  Jane Austen’s characters find a job.

Write a job application letter for ONE of the following:

  1. Mrs Norris, no longer financially supported by Sir Thomas Bertram, writes to Lady Catherine de Bourgh to apply for the position of housekeeper at Rosings; OR
  2. Anne Steele, neglected by her sister Lucy Ferrars, needs work and writes to Mrs John Knightley to apply for the position of governess to the Knightley children in London; OR
  3. James Morland, rejected by Isabella Thorpe, writes to Captain Wentworth to apply for the position of naval chaplain on board Captain Wentworth’s ship. 

1st prize
Miss Anne Steele writes to Mrs John Knightley seeking the position of governess in her household
by Shirley Byrne

My Dear Mrs Knightley,

It has been bought to my notice that you will shortly be requiring a new Governess to care for your Dear Children and it so happens that I am most desirous of securing such Position. My Uncle, Mr Pratt, who is a Tutor, is an acquaintance of Mrs Goddard who runs a School in Highbury and she told Mr Pratt that there would soon be a position in your London House.

I must say that I am distractedly fond of children; I doat on them and would happily spend every minute attending to their needs and instruction. Mrs Goddard tells my uncle that your Family is excessive Smart and Well Behaved and indeed they seem to be just the sort of children I would like to reside with of all things.

As young orphan girls, my sister Lucy Steele and me, was very fortunate to be taken in and looked after by our Uncle who was tutor to several young gentlemen and even though we did not attend his classes (which was of course only for Fee-Paying Pupils) we was able to pick up many useful lessons that will be of vast help when instructing children.

If you would like any references to my Nature and Character I am sure Mrs Jennings and her daughter, Lady Middleton would be most happy to oblige in this respect as I have had vast dealings with Lady Middleton’s lively Delightful Children in fact they was left in me and my sister’s care on many occasions and we had many jolly rough and tumbles with them.

A vast unexpected change in my life has come about, as previous to now I resided with my Sister who has lately become Mrs Robert Ferrars. This has resulted in her being much risen in her Personal Affairs. I had hoped to be residing with Mr and Mrs Ferrars, but it seems that my sister has too many calls on her time to be able to have me with her so I must look for other means of support for my self. Although my sister is now a very Wealthy Woman she has never gave me any sign that she would help me. I was badly let down when my sister Eloped with Mr Ferrars. She took all my money with her and I was left with But a few Shillings in the world. Luckily Mrs Jennings stood by me and give me Five Guineas to get me to Exeter where I have been for a few weeks with Mrs Burgess, but I cannot remain here permanently.

I must confess Dear Mrs Knightley, that at one time I had cherished a Secret Hope that a certain Dr Davis, who was a Beau of mine, would make me an Offer of Marriage, but in the end it all came to nothing.

It would be a vast pleasure to me to look after Your Children and live in your London Household. I hope to hear your reply very soon.

Yours respectfully,
Anne Steele

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2nd prize  
Mrs Norris writes to Lady Catherine de Bourgh
by Nadia Cameron

To: Lady de Bourgh
Rosings Park
Kent

The 5th September ’15

To the most honourable Lady Catherine de Bourgh,

I find myself impelled to call on your ladyship’s magnanimous nature to consider me for the position of housekeeper in your greatest and most palatial of estates, Rosings.

I am confident you will sympathise with my decision to leave Mansfield Park after the incorrigible way my niece, Fanny Price, has abused the charity bestowed upon her by myself. She has usurped her most beloved and renowned cousin, Mrs Maria Rushworth, from her rightful place in the family unit. Fanny proved herself ungrateful to a fault. All because she fancied that Henry Crawford, a man many tiers above her in society, liked her.

My unwavering sense of duty to society’s revered class structure, and my devotion to Mrs Rushworth, convinced me I must give up my own comforts to make a stand for the correct way of things. As Mrs Rushworth has now regained her rightful place in society, I must consider my future.

I insist on maintaining the highest levels of decorum and distinction between the classes – an invaluable trait for the housekeeper at Rosings. Aristocracy is a privilege which should be honoured. As my own actions at Mansfield demonstrate.

I single-handedly brought about the placement of one of my unfortunate sister’s minions into the home of Sir Thomas and Lady Bertram as a devout act of charity. Far be it for anyone to accuse me of being uncharitable. While doing my utmost to raise Fanny with unimpeachable morals, economy and education, I also strove to make sure she was fully aware of her lower station in life and her mother’s folly in marrying beneath her. It was imperative that the distinction between Fanny and her more clever cousins was stressed and that she recognise her uncommonly good fortune. As I said to Fanny that day she was honoured with an invitation to Mrs Grant’s dinner, ‘Remember you should be the lowest and the last’.

Do not let it be said that I am not aware of the true worth of class hierarchy. Please be assured I shall see your ladyship’s rank and rule are preserved and noted with the respect and awe due to you from all of those in your employ.

Another talent which I pride myself on is my prudence and superior management of household finances. I have a keen eye for detail and exercise the most watchful attentions to all aspects of the home.

My sense of economy while living with my late husband, Mr Norris, the parson at Mansfield Park, kept us from needless expense and waste of our narrow income. Even when I removed to the White house after his unfortunate death, my money management was such that I could still afford to keep a spare room for my friends. It’s strict economy which makes a home efficient and that is what I bring to you in my humblest of manners. Your ladyship’s reputation for excessive attentiveness to every detail strikes a chord in my own heart. I am confident my skills would be truly valued at Rosings.

My motto is moderation in all things. I trust that this outlook on household proceedings will meet with your ladyship’s satisfaction and condescension.

I eagerly await your reply.
Your most faithful of servants,
Mrs Norris

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Resume

Name: Mrs Norris (formerly Miss Ward of Huntingdon)

Situation: A poor, helpless, forlorn widow, with spirits quite broken down

Career history

Mansfield Park: assistant to members of the family in all manner of household management. Also overseeing tutelage of beloved nieces with governess, Miss Lee

Sotherton: Consultant to Mr and Mrs Rushworth for domestic matters

The Parsonage: Running the home and charitable works on a narrow income of just under £1000 per annum

Personal achievements

Many charitable deeds, most notably orchestrating the placement of Fanny Price at Mansfield Park

Saving a full three-quarters of a yard of green baize during set construction for Mansfield’s production of Lovers’ Vows

Organising the Mansfield Park ball

Skills

Micro-management / attention to detail
Strict sense of economy
Well-versed in societal laws
Events co-ordination

Interests

Everybody’s business

References

Upon request

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Mrs Norris writes to Lady Catherine de Bourgh  
by Marjorie Jones

Mansfield Cottage
Mansfield

21st February, 1812

My dear Lady Catherine,

My friend the Rev William Collins has told me that you are in want of a housekeeper for your country seat of Rosings, in the county of Kent. May I make so bold as to offer myself in this capacity? Mr Collins has explained that with your acute sense of delicacy you shrink from advertisement in the vulgar press and prefer to rely on personal recommendation. I have had the pleasure of knowing Mr Collins for many years, having first met him soon after he and my late husband took orders together. I am confident that he can give you all the assurances you need as to my honesty, reliability and competence.

My late esteemed husband, the Rev Septimus Norris, was appointed to the living of Mansfield, which is in the gift of Sir Thomas Bertram of Mansfield Park, in the county of Northampton. His wife is my sister, so you will appreciate that I am happy in my family connections and am used to moving in the best circles. I am sure that your Ladyship would prefer to appoint a person who is a gentlewoman and well-connected.

My sister, Lady Bertram, is in delicate health and Sir Thomas has welcomed my assistance in the day to day ordering of his household. I have no children of my own so it has been my special care to watch over my 2 nephews and 2 nieces, to act as friend and chaperone to the girls and guide and mentor to the boys. Following the loss of my dear husband I removed from the parsonage to a more modest abode, very close to Mansfield Park, and I found that I was needed there on most days. My sad position as a widow meant that I had to live much more economically, but good Sir Thomas, in appreciation for the help I gave him, was happy to augment my small income. I accepted his help with a good conscience because I knew how much he appreciated my good offices, especially when he was obliged to be absent for several months on business connected with his West India properties.

I regret to say that it has been a problem with these same properties which has resulted in a marked reduction of Sir Thomas’ income. He has told me, most reluctantly, that he is no longer in a position to add anything to my widow’s mite and he thoroughly approves of my decision to seek a post which will offer me a secure home and be compatible with my status as a gentlewoman. Mr Collins has spoken to both Sir Thomas and me and cannot praise too highly your affability, intelligence and good breeding. He is convinced that the person accepted into your household will be blessed indeed.

I think I have much to offer. I am stout and healthy, of an active, busy nature, well able to supervise a large household. As far as servants are concerned, in my dealings with my own and those at Mansfield Park, I have always insisted on punctuality, cleanliness and a proper respect for their betters. Regular churchgoing is enforced and in the case of young women levity has been frowned upon, no followers have been allowed and I have personally turned away two housemaids for wearing white.

I am economical by nature and have in the past made considerable savings on Sir Thomas’ behalf. For instance, our young people were involved in getting up private theatricals and I was in charge of making the costumes. In one instance I was able to return several yards of satin as I found that with clever needlework I was able to make do with much less than was first considered to be needed. A considerable quantity of green baize was needed for the curtain and with care I was able to make do with fewer curtain rings than I had first thought would be needed. At the time Sir Thomas’ carpenter was put to work building scenery and I caught his young son bringing a piece of wood to his father just as the servants were sitting to their dinner, with the obvious object of getting himself a free meal. I hate this sort of insolent encroachment and if accepted into your Ladyship’s household I would not tolerate such behaviour.

When I was mistress of the Parsonage I kept a good table, although eschewing extravagance. A good deal was expected of me in the way of entertaining while my husband was alive but once I was alone I could not continue in the same liberal style. However, I have been used to a very good table at Mansfield Park and I assure your Ladyship that I am fit for anything in the housekeeping line which might be needed at Rosings.

I look forward to hearing from you and I hope that your response is favourable.

I remain, Madam
Your humble and obedient servant
Julia Charity Norris.

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20 January 2008

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